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Len Vs Merc

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Post by Vyren Wed Sep 17, 2008 6:17 am

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My attempted render of Len dead after using Mijin Gakure and Merc beside them. A subtle focus and conversation between the weapons.
(The fuzzycloudy thing is smoke from mijin gakure) Feel free to reply and give me opinions!
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Post by Mercanuis Wed Sep 17, 2008 7:56 am

I think it's pretty good. I think a better shot would be Lenny unleashing the explosion, and Merc flying in the air, blown back.

My only problem is that it makes me look kinda like a Sith Lord. I'm hovering over her body like I'm about to have my way with her or chop her up o.O
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